Kiew Missions on landing, Asia, Evropa, Avstralia, Amjerika, Ozejania, all belong together but they do not see, connected to each other they are but so many voices do disagree, now all in hypersleep for their good, what will come out when waking and in separated far distant earthen's mood?
I had this whole story in my head the first time I saw her. That she was a lone guardian of the human civilization in cryo stasis waiting for the arrival at another planet. That she was trained from youth to do this task, so that after like..50 years, she would still be alive to wake everyone up when they got there.
I feel like this version has a much stronger composition and flow, and you aren't really losing that much of the detail of the original piece, which was mostly mirrored on the other side anyway. I say keep this version